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Today’s topic is: There don’t seem to be any universal rules for indicating texting in books and short stories. How do you handle it?
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I’ve not had much cause for thinking about this matter. In Chasing Shadows, texting isn’t a thing. Communications are pretty simplistic – wireless radio, telephones, morse code and forms of optical transmission such as semaphores. Different times. But I’ve read plenty of books that use texts and have seen them handled differently seen them used within speech or quote marks. I’m not a massive fan of this approach, it can be pretty confusing to tell it isn’t speech.
I’ve also seen texts italicised within the book. This also risks being potentially confusing. I’ve seen italics used to indicate internal thoughts, so they don’t immediately scream text messages to me. That said, this route is marginally better than the speech or quote marks method, but not by much. Some authors have used block capitals. These kind of work. Generally they’re not used in dialogue except to denote shouting and would feature within speech marks.
One thing I’ve seen, albeit pretty infrequently, is texts depicted through the book design. A graphic of sorts on the page depicting the message boxes familiar to most. The few times I’ve seen it I’ve thought it was pretty effective. It cleanly conveys the use of texts. I imagine it will slowly become more common to see in books, but right now it’s not something that will feature too much in my own work.
I like the idea of a screenshot type of presentation.
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You’re right in that capital letters indicate shouting. I use italics. A graphic showing text boxes would be great, but I don’t know how to do that.
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Sometimes books use formatting with left and right justified to show dialogue via text, too, but that can be a problem if formatting fails (happens frequently in ebooks). Seeing it written out in bubbles like you do on your phone would be clearer, but also looks childish to me. Maybe that’s why I’ve mostly seen it in Young Adult Work. @samanthabwriter from
Balancing Act
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I think presenting texts in graphics boxes would be hard to get right in the varying kinds of e-book files and readers.
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